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Memory
I think of you
often
Consider
times we spoke
times we wrote
times we floated
I think of you
often
over a cup of tea
a craft
or music
I think of you often
Often enough
to smile
and skip a heart
beat
when I see your
face
I think of you
often
often enough
to change
a category
from Observation
Published 23rd Jun 2021
| Edited 24th Jun 2021
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23rd Jun 2021 9:25pm
Anonymous
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23rd Jun 2021 9:42pm
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29th Jun 2021 3:25am
19th Aug 2021 4:42pm
Well now.
Are you familiar with the term lament?
People think it’s a sad word, but I don’t. Lamenting is the passion in the expression of grief. And many people don’t realise that grief can be (and more so is) beautiful in its own little way.
There’s this gorgeous sense of passing here. Perhaps not in death, but in other ways. Almost as if you loved with all of you. I could feel it rising from the page.
That last stanza is interesting. Voyeuristic. And some clever wordplay.
So glad I got to read your work today. It’s been a joy with a few good cups of tea. Don’t know why I haven’t seen it before.
Have a smashing day. Try not to pea yourself laughing. ☀️
-M
Are you familiar with the term lament?
People think it’s a sad word, but I don’t. Lamenting is the passion in the expression of grief. And many people don’t realise that grief can be (and more so is) beautiful in its own little way.
There’s this gorgeous sense of passing here. Perhaps not in death, but in other ways. Almost as if you loved with all of you. I could feel it rising from the page.
That last stanza is interesting. Voyeuristic. And some clever wordplay.
So glad I got to read your work today. It’s been a joy with a few good cups of tea. Don’t know why I haven’t seen it before.
Have a smashing day. Try not to pea yourself laughing. ☀️
-M
