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Fake Ass Friends..
Fukin Hundreds,
Hand Shakes,
High Fives,
Always There,
“Wit Ya Till The End”,
“Down Wiv You Bruv,
That I Swear”..
What The Fuck,
Strangers Talking Shit,
"Down With You Bruv?",
"I Got Ya Back",
"I’ll Take The Hit"..
You’re A Dik,
You Sound Like A Prick,
A Fucking Knob,
You Make Me Sick..
“With Me Till The End”,
“You Got My Back”,
Until It Goes Down,
Shit Starts Flying,
I Look To The Corner,
Your Ass Crouched Down Crying..
Run And Hide,
“Yeah Be With You Soon”,
Motherfuckers,
See Shit Go Down,
Soon Change There Tune..
Ya Find Out Who’s Who,
Who Ya Friends Really Are,
Some will stay,
Some Run Afar,
The Ones Who Stay,
You Fight To Keep,
The Ones Who Run,
Cowards,
Two Faced Losers,
Fit For The Trash Heap..
Hand Shakes,
High Fives,
Always There,
“Wit Ya Till The End”,
“Down Wiv You Bruv,
That I Swear”..
What The Fuck,
Strangers Talking Shit,
"Down With You Bruv?",
"I Got Ya Back",
"I’ll Take The Hit"..
You’re A Dik,
You Sound Like A Prick,
A Fucking Knob,
You Make Me Sick..
“With Me Till The End”,
“You Got My Back”,
Until It Goes Down,
Shit Starts Flying,
I Look To The Corner,
Your Ass Crouched Down Crying..
Run And Hide,
“Yeah Be With You Soon”,
Motherfuckers,
See Shit Go Down,
Soon Change There Tune..
Ya Find Out Who’s Who,
Who Ya Friends Really Are,
Some will stay,
Some Run Afar,
The Ones Who Stay,
You Fight To Keep,
The Ones Who Run,
Cowards,
Two Faced Losers,
Fit For The Trash Heap..
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Hey
21st Feb 2012 3:02pm
I've had this for ages on my computer but I just didnt have a clue about the grammar..
I know it's not right, my English isnt the best I'm afraid.
I know it's not right, my English isnt the best I'm afraid.
re: Hey
21st Feb 2012 5:52pm
re: re: Hey
21st Feb 2012 5:53pm
re: re: re: Hey
21st Feb 2012 10:37pm
=)
21st Feb 2012 6:06pm
Yeah,a true write again.
Related and Repented experiences.
The best part of your pieces is that you keep trying is evident.
Related and Repented experiences.
The best part of your pieces is that you keep trying is evident.
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re: =)
21st Feb 2012 6:18pm
I can only do true or real life writes, I've tried making something up but I dont "feel it" ya know..
I do keep trying, lol
I think I'm to old to be learning now anyway..
Thank you both for your help
I do keep trying, lol
I think I'm to old to be learning now anyway..
Thank you both for your help
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Oct 2019 8:45pm
22nd Feb 2012 8:07pm
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re: :)
22nd Feb 2012 8:48pm
Thank you loads,
and yeah I agree..
People have made comments about my lack of grammar so I was a little worried thats all..
Thanks again for your time :o)
and yeah I agree..
People have made comments about my lack of grammar so I was a little worried thats all..
Thanks again for your time :o)
I SO CAN RELATE TO THIS
23rd Feb 2012 6:51am
re: I SO CAN RELATE TO THIS
23rd Feb 2012 3:47pm
re: I SO CAN RELATE TO THIS
23rd Feb 2012 3:49pm
Fake Ass Friends
23rd Feb 2012 6:58am
You're never too old to start learning, Clayton. And I like the grammar. It keeps the meaning there. If you focus too much on the words themselves, you lose sight of the meaning. And I agree with this poem 100%. Fight for whom you care for and drop the rest. That's what I believe, anyway. Take it easy mate.
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re: Fake Ass Friends
23rd Feb 2012 3:52pm
Hey mate,
Thanks for saying but I was 82 last week, my learning days are behind me :-)
I try and pick up what I can but that's all :-)
Thanks for ya help and ya time mate, hope things are cool and ya looking after yaself :-)
Thanks for saying but I was 82 last week, my learning days are behind me :-)
I try and pick up what I can but that's all :-)
Thanks for ya help and ya time mate, hope things are cool and ya looking after yaself :-)
fake
24th Feb 2012 9:12am
Cursing, foul-mouthed, yet most of those mediocre friends are fake, what an irony.
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Re: Fake Ass Friends..
11th Feb 2013 3:22pm
I have encountered many and you poem holds true to the strongest! Great poem
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