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Savages
Living in jungles
Seen as uncivilized beast
Summer's prey and feast
Seen as uncivilized beast
Summer's prey and feast
Published 8th Jun 2021
Author's Note
My first attempt at writing a haiku.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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- Edited 10th Jul 2021 8:45pm
8th Jun 2021 11:56pm
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9th Jun 2021 6:03am
Congrats dude we tried several times and gave up. But we enjoyed this one dude, tight work
9th Jun 2021 11:53am
Thanks bro. Decided to try my hand at something different. Not really my cup of tea so I won't be doing many of these. Appreciate the feedback.
11th Jun 2021 12:09pm
16th Jul 2021 2:26pm
And a good one at that. Although limited in choice of words, they always give a wisdom and mystery.
Nicely done sir
Nicely done sir
