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Liquid Sunshine

liquid sunshine's falling stops
turning into liquid drops

moving quickly flowing down
from the trees onto the ground -

liquid sunshine's misty clouds
steely grey fine liquid shrouds

promising a starless night
of liquid sunshine with no light

within a moving pressure zone
in the air above our home -

the sunlight falling everwhere
plus Earth spinning moves the air

as liquid sunshine drips and drops
on our windows 'til it stops
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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A rainy afternoon...best listened to with headphones
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