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Time reveals
Time reveals
written May 25th, 2021
Time gradually reveals
treasures dear
lines of poetry
flows of water
buds on the tree
they feed the soul
if patience perseveres
polishing
raw painful shards
until they crack open
revealing glorious brilliance
that shines briefly
time dearest
just another day
another second
hold on
for time to reveal
her treasures.
written May 25th, 2021
Time gradually reveals
treasures dear
lines of poetry
flows of water
buds on the tree
they feed the soul
if patience perseveres
polishing
raw painful shards
until they crack open
revealing glorious brilliance
that shines briefly
time dearest
just another day
another second
hold on
for time to reveal
her treasures.
Published 2nd Jun 2021
Author's Note
Each day brings something different. Some days are painful poems, some days there is more light.
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2nd Jun 2021 6:58pm
It is true that time is a Just entity, as the Wheel of Life. It turns toward both sun and shadow respectively. As quickly as something arrives, it's time to go.
A very nice, reflective write, senid.
A very nice, reflective write, senid.
3rd Jun 2021 11:33am
I echo A, with time as an entity.
And then there is the interaction by the perception with the entity. And that is what I see in this write... The state of mindfulness as the interaction with time.
This leads me to the question, and it seems like a valid question, what is the nature of time without mankind? Was time created specifically for the human experience? I think insights into these questions may be garnered on varying levels based on the nature of our interactions with the entity, time.
I think it is the watcher who becomes wise.
I very much like this write.
And then there is the interaction by the perception with the entity. And that is what I see in this write... The state of mindfulness as the interaction with time.
This leads me to the question, and it seems like a valid question, what is the nature of time without mankind? Was time created specifically for the human experience? I think insights into these questions may be garnered on varying levels based on the nature of our interactions with the entity, time.
I think it is the watcher who becomes wise.
I very much like this write.
