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Belly
... ...
Morning
A bright sunny day...
With walking people on a wide avenue
Afternoon
An empty street shaded by leafy trees
The one the artists love secretly
Evening
Neon over sidewalks
How complicated is the night?
Wondering ...
Wandering ...
The belly of the beast
A lonely pregnant teen...
Looks at me ...
Like a lover ?
Like a wife ?
Like a father ?
Like a daughter?
... ...
Morning
A bright sunny day...
With walking people on a wide avenue
Afternoon
An empty street shaded by leafy trees
The one the artists love secretly
Evening
Neon over sidewalks
How complicated is the night?
Wondering ...
Wandering ...
The belly of the beast
A lonely pregnant teen...
Looks at me ...
Like a lover ?
Like a wife ?
Like a father ?
Like a daughter?
... ...
Published 21st May 2021
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21st May 2021 4:56am
I feel for her... deeply... you conveyed heartache from her one look with your succinct brevity and the formatting/italics really assisted so perfectly there as well.... nicely titled as well... Marks
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Ty for sharing
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B
👌🏻
Ty for sharing
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B
21st May 2021 1:26pm
You're welcome, Bluevelvete.
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*... My succinct brevity...* ... I like that. Thank you.
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*... My succinct brevity...* ... I like that. Thank you.
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21st May 2021 11:44pm
Yipe. I was NOT expecting that ending. I was meandering along with you nodding, then my heart dropped into my stomach. You captured that moment perfectly.
22nd May 2021 00:16am
9th Jun 2021 3:06pm
Yet, the world spins and life goes on...yes, reality. Thanks and peace, oral
10th Jun 2021 2:47pm
