seeing the dark forest for the trees

it is one of those works that
are an easy RL but difficult
to comment ones

job BV.

totally understandable , cf.
I very much appreciate you reading,
the generous list add



... and danke for the kind words. - 🌹
-B

Dear BV,

Hmmm as I place myself inside that photo with your words I feel a sense of enlightenment in that all things murky and inexplicable have a precise meaning. Not necessarily one I want but at least the darkness makes sense and I can move forward. I’m now a keeper of the dark secrets and my Cheshire like smile holds those gems and I feel a bit powerful really. I really loved the mystical quality of the picture and the mythical essence of the poem. My coven feels very robust at the moment.🧙🏼‍♀️💫
Fab write. H🌷

Ahhhh. ...Yes, that power multiplies within —affording the robust nature of your coven to be truly potent, indeed....You've tapped a resource, my dear poetess ... heh heh...... Ohh, if only!...  
😁 😜 🤭😉

I am basking in your comments, dear H. So very glad you could also see the forest for the trees. Much thanks for the generous list add and all your kindness. It means a lot to me - 💙  
So mote it be! *😉  
🌲🧹 🧙🏻 🔮 🧙‍♂️🧙🏻‍♀️🦉 🌲
-xo
B

Inside the dark forest where we end up is up to us.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful sexy woman.

Thanks for that, Francisco
🌹

Nice deepening of what is typically a cliche ... owning it ... making it yours ... making it original ... a rare skill for a poet ... you did it so masterfully ... the short lines build and maintain a cadence ... that keeps the reader/listener engaged ... awesome line breaks ... dappling with ripe plump words ... then the orphan line closing ... brings the speaker back into the forefront of the poem ... great write my dear ...

Thanks for the in depth feedback, LilD.
I am so appreciative 🙏🏻..... Ambiguity is not normally my strong suit... I'm not normally hitting readers over the head with my intentions.... lol... I know this one was a difficult one to pinpoint... or nail down in a definitive way........ having to do with more of a feeling than an actual theme..... and you got that ..... all my gratitude...

Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
xo
B

Ohh Rian!
Your comments are just riddled with warmth and supportive light. I am so very heartened and uplifted that you can see and feel the things you do, when reading. It's MY joy, indeed. Thank you so very much for taking the time to convey your thoughts and the generous list add  
I feel extremely lucky and deeply grateful.

Much love and returned light
🌹-💙  
B

Such, a beautiful write
The portrayal of nature meeting imagination is wonderful...
In the dark forest, you can see darkness or the beauty of the trees....

I dig this

POft,
Thank you for sharing such wonderful comments.. Your thoughts and perspectives are valued so much, allowing me a better understanding of life around me and as well as my own thoughts.

Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
xo
B

Moody and dark like the black forest at night. You took me into the heart of what poetry can be when written by a master. Each subtle nuance made me sigh and feel the majestic force of true poetry the kind I live and breathe to read.

Xo
John

Thank you so much, John.
Your comments are truly amazing and you humble me, as always become a deer in headlights... lol.. I appreciate you, the generous list add and all your loveliness within these words.... I'm over the moon that you felt my intentions.  

In kindness,  
🌹-💙
- B

Dearest, Lady Blue
This piece is beautifully composed. The progression from "potent darkness" to "a type of amalgamated cerulean light" is inspirational and demonstrates such a wonderous command of language...and quite a sapiosexual tingle maker.
Bravissima, Goddess BB🌹🐻💞🐰

One word that evokes the yummiest tingles for us both is sapiosexual.... AND don't we both know it!!
haha 😂 😂... I'm extremely grateful for you and your kind words, BB. Thank you for reading and leaving the best of sentiments. I always appreciate you taking the time to pinpoint, like you do. It's very helpful and it means a great deal to me. Just wanted you to know that never gets overlooked!
I'm so glad you found something that resonated within and spurred feedback.
Always so pleasurable, BB!
🐻🌹🐇
xo
-B

Thank you for commenting on my propensity for recapitulating my favorite lines (thought I'd used a coupla sapiosexual words there. Tingles?) It helps to know that you appreciate them. 🌹🙏

totally *tingles*.... heh...
😉

I love the dark feeling to it and the breath of reality.

Thanks so much for reading, A... I am glad you enjoyed.
🌹
-B

Oh...  Such edifying beauty in this write!..  

I understand that a human being in a state of meditation generates hundred of thousands of photons, which are thought to participate in the foundational elements of reality.  

Truly majestic!

I appreciate your insightful comments, Cipher. Your encouraging and helpful remarks have me beaming... I'm sincerely grateful that you've taken the time you have to leave such insightful inspiration  

It's a true delight to share in moments of majesty, indeed... ✨ 💫 ✨  

Warmest regards,
🌹 - B

I like this perception, seeing beyond what are eyes are capable and feeling the nature of it all.

Wonderful spill.

I think I was feeling pleasure and basking within the darkness that was pressing upon, in that moment (can't quite remember.. lol) I appreciate your comments, Walter... I wish I was that deep, but I very much doubt it.... hahaha.... glad you enjoyed it, my friend 🙏🏻 thanks so much!!
🌹 - 💙
B