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Thanks, really, but
I won’t go.
Can’t pick my
dress. No, I
haven’t showered, or
washed my hair.
The sun is
really bright today,
my body aches.
I know it’s
been eight days.
I’ll stay here
though I would
rather be going
I just can’t.
But really, thanks.
I won’t go.
Can’t pick my
dress. No, I
haven’t showered, or
washed my hair.
The sun is
really bright today,
my body aches.
I know it’s
been eight days.
I’ll stay here
though I would
rather be going
I just can’t.
But really, thanks.
Published 17th May 2021
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17th May 2021 3:21pm
Dear U,
How well you describe this feeling of apathy. It’s becoming such a fight to push myself out the door and now summer is coming and that means dresses and no tights which means shaving my legs. Oh my god the energy for that is insurmountable but...We can’t let “them” take us down. We can keep rising above it. Plus I’m sure your dress is super pretty.
Very relatable write. H🌷
How well you describe this feeling of apathy. It’s becoming such a fight to push myself out the door and now summer is coming and that means dresses and no tights which means shaving my legs. Oh my god the energy for that is insurmountable but...We can’t let “them” take us down. We can keep rising above it. Plus I’m sure your dress is super pretty.
Very relatable write. H🌷
18th May 2021 1:02am
thank you for your comment @honoria. your ideas are so appreciated. It is a fight. A very big fight sometimes. I appreciate you. warmly, ursa
25th May 2021 9:06pm
Yeah...have a few drinks then go out. Sounds bad but I kinda get it, how you feel.
The poem brought across the despair that you hoped it would, only rather too well.
The poem brought across the despair that you hoped it would, only rather too well.
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
25th May 2021 10:02pm
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