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Gardens of forbidden temptations
Bends thin and graceful
You found under your hand ...
Having played a chord of mad passion
One string, another string
You found hills, hollows, slopes,
Drawing a contour a little breathing ...
Inhaling a body, feelings, moans
Burning again and again to the ground ...
And in this sweet lust
And a little above a girl's thighs,
In the gardens of forbidden temptations
How delightful is your captivity ...
You found under your hand ...
Having played a chord of mad passion
One string, another string
You found hills, hollows, slopes,
Drawing a contour a little breathing ...
Inhaling a body, feelings, moans
Burning again and again to the ground ...
And in this sweet lust
And a little above a girl's thighs,
In the gardens of forbidden temptations
How delightful is your captivity ...
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Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 4:05pm
Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 4:17pm
I think DaVinci did/does a bit of everything, right? So being a farmer does not surprise me. ;) I am sure growing many beautiful flowers, with fragrant pink petals moist, slightly open and trembling under the touch. 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 4:07pm
Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 4:21pm
Ah yes! We must taste the forbidden fruit. It is so irresistible, right? Even if it's bad for us sometimes... ;) 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 9:52pm
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 4:16pm
Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 4:25pm
I love wicked. ;) I know you do too Lj. X Always important to have a good farmer to keep the garden in good order. It's one of the most important jobs. ;) 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 4:37pm
foreboding mounted by the day but to look is more than to just enjoy...lingers in the essence of thought
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Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 5:26pm
Ah, the excitement of the look and anticipation to eagerly explore the garden... it's such a lovely thought Tim and what can come next, well that's much more exciting. ;) 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 5:05pm
Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 5:27pm
Hey BC! I thought you might want to do a little gardening for the senses on a Sunday! I am really happy you liked it. ;) 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
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Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 5:28pm
It's the kind of captivity a woman longs for too. Spending time together in those gardens is the most exciting place to be after all. ;) Thanks for stopping in Tim. 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 6:09pm
Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 8:41pm
Oh how the road noise gets me thinking, and then I get into trouble because I start driving really fast. :p Thank you so much, visionary is such a strong word but I love it :) and I love the love. Geez, way to much L word going on here... ;) 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 6:39pm
Oh the garden. I'm sure there's a special Rose with the softest petals and the prettiest bud.
Oh such a garden
Love and light
Ron x
Oh such a garden
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 8:42pm
Oh yes, the garden! Makes me think of your wonderful and gorgeous rose series. Always wishing nothing but the most beautiful garden, flowers, and love and light to you Ron. 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
16th May 2021 11:49pm
Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
17th May 2021 00:59am
Thank you so much Numer. I really love the erotic path so I am glad you could take it here too. Thanks for the flag. ;) X 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
18th May 2021 1:57pm
Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
18th May 2021 2:01pm
Thank you so much for the comment LDF! I am really happy you liked it and found it engaging. :) 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
20th May 2021 3:39am
Such captivity is the garden of earthly delights. I could spend many a day wandering your garden my tongue only to find the dream sought by philosophers through the centuries the answer to Plato's dialectic. Therein lies world peace and salvation for men. Love where this took me into a place I never want to leave.
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John
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John
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Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
20th May 2021 3:25pm
"... into a place I never want to leave" Now that is the best compliment! I am so happy to capture in my garden for a moment. ;) Spending the day wandering ... that sounds like a day filled with beautiful nectar flowing. One of passion and fire, as well as peace and love. It is so beautiful when two people can come together and lose themselves in each other completely. 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
24th May 2021 7:46pm
Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
25th May 2021 12:40pm
So full of temptations! ;) but also get tempted. I am so happy you like my writing style! I know it can be different. :) 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷
Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
6th Jul 2021 10:55pm
"In the gardens of forbidden temptations
How delightful is your captivity ..." it's in our nature to yearn and delve, then to fight the restless urges with decorum.
Nicely penned Kristina.
How delightful is your captivity ..." it's in our nature to yearn and delve, then to fight the restless urges with decorum.
Nicely penned Kristina.
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Re: Re. Gardens of forbidden temptations
7th Jul 2021 6:27pm
That is so true... I couldn't agree more about yearning, delving, and decorum. :) Thank you so much for the comment Wally. I am really happy you liked it. 👨🏻🌾🌺🌸🌷