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Poetry is...
I have a mask,
Poetry is…
Lost and found
Breathless wounds
Beautiful shapes
Your senses, void
To feel you
Wounds, never again!
The alone room…. black and white
Poetry is…
Lost and found
Breathless wounds
Beautiful shapes
Your senses, void
To feel you
Wounds, never again!
The alone room…. black and white
Published 19th Feb 2012
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19th Feb 2012 7:36am
This is very simple and nice. I think the first line "I have a mask" doesn't really fit into the poem. But other than that I like it.
21st Feb 2012 5:52am
Thank you, you're in a sense right "I have a mask" does not really fit with the wording of the poem, but it has more of a meaning to what poetry really is for me a mask.
