deepundergroundpoetry.com
S
I give you up,
because I cannot hold you any longer, nooses of forget me nots are to be laid at the wake.
because I cannot hold you any longer, nooses of forget me nots are to be laid at the wake.
Published 15th May 2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 5
reading list entries 1
comments 3
reads 385
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
15th May 2021 12:40pm
15th May 2021 12:54pm
Dear I,
Your poem has grabbed my attention by its intensity and brevity in realizing that sometimes letting go of that which we love the most may be the hardest thing but the most necessary. I really appreciate this write today. H🌷
Your poem has grabbed my attention by its intensity and brevity in realizing that sometimes letting go of that which we love the most may be the hardest thing but the most necessary. I really appreciate this write today. H🌷
17th May 2021 11:43pm
sharp n elegantly short ..in that giving up.. let go .. the detachably attaching or the attachably detaching spirituality ..the stringy rolling yet unfallingly apart dewy droplets-on- waxy lotusy leaves' way of life of love.. of continuing breathing the love infinity howsoev the distance the death ..in all its growing eternity. .
juz me in all wordy excess from your verses that tear me open.. to cracking light .
light love & write on ev:)
juz me in all wordy excess from your verses that tear me open.. to cracking light .
light love & write on ev:)
