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Heavy On My Heart
So near but yet so far you are,
Some days it lies heavy on my heart,
It feels like you’re an elusive piece,
In a game that’s still to start.
The connection is strong, to you I am drawn.
I see your flaws and I think you see mine.
I have cared for you deeply, into love I did fall,
But this stays unsaid, I just can’t cross that line.
Some days it lies heavy on my heart,
It feels like you’re an elusive piece,
In a game that’s still to start.
The connection is strong, to you I am drawn.
I see your flaws and I think you see mine.
I have cared for you deeply, into love I did fall,
But this stays unsaid, I just can’t cross that line.
Published 8th May 2021
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11th May 2021 10:39am
Oh ... I love the ache of this ... nice job with the rhyme ... good flow ...
12th May 2021 10:17pm
The palpable feel of such want and desire mixed with the reservation of 'crossing that line' .... it permeates deeply, here.... just superbly conveyed and the pull on my sense of empathy is just..... ohh my..... Immense. This resonates...
Terrific ink - 🌹
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Terrific ink - 🌹
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12th May 2021 10:24pm
Sad but with a lot of heartfelt meaning. Thanks for sharing. Peace and hugs, oral
