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The Burn

It burns
You want them to want you
They did
Now on to someone else

Written by roadNoise

Published 7th May 2021

#heartbroken #jealousy

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Re. The Burn

7th May 2021 11:55pm

Ouch ... I know that feeling ... nice crisp write ...

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8th May 2021 00:07am

It's painful
So much ache

Thanks L

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Re. The Burn

8th May 2021 2:45am

.maybe they shoulda tried

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8th May 2021 4:14am

Noted

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Re. The Burn

8th May 2021 4:01am

It does hurt. Love has no guarantee. When love works it feel like you are on top of the world. Keep on writing.

Read poems by Phantom2426

8th May 2021 4:15am

Top is the best Francisco, no lie

Stay tuned brother

Thx

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Re. The Burn

Anonymous

22nd Aug 2021 3:45pm

Hey R��.I know many will relate to this simple worded truth��.I sure do��.purple luv & hugs xo :)

22nd Aug 2021 3:47pm

Simple truths flower girl

Thank you for your comment

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