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WHY I COMMENT ON POEMS
HONOR
It is an honor,
to me, for me,
to read the poems
and writings of
others, regardless of
where they appear;
even on toilet walls
NO,
not to sit in judgment,
criticize, or evaluate,
but to enjoy, meditate,
and appreciate what the
writer has put into the poem.
Some are written out of joy,
some out of sadness, anger,
sexual arousal, being coy;
others seek to challenge
and create questions,
and even confusion which
is good at the time.
While I recognize spelling errors,
syntax goofs, and other correctness
English Saints worship,
[I respect them, too]
I am okay with it.
It's the writer's heart,
mind, and soul, hopefully,
that's speaking or being shared.
I consider it a privilege and
gift when I'm able to read
YOU.
I am waiting.
Hope you feel the same.
It is an honor,
to me, for me,
to read the poems
and writings of
others, regardless of
where they appear;
even on toilet walls
NO,
not to sit in judgment,
criticize, or evaluate,
but to enjoy, meditate,
and appreciate what the
writer has put into the poem.
Some are written out of joy,
some out of sadness, anger,
sexual arousal, being coy;
others seek to challenge
and create questions,
and even confusion which
is good at the time.
While I recognize spelling errors,
syntax goofs, and other correctness
English Saints worship,
[I respect them, too]
I am okay with it.
It's the writer's heart,
mind, and soul, hopefully,
that's speaking or being shared.
I consider it a privilege and
gift when I'm able to read
YOU.
I am waiting.
Hope you feel the same.
Published 4th May 2021
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4th May 2021 9:42pm
You nailed it dear poet ... I try to do the same ... I believe those of us who post here want to be read ... get feedback ... encouragement ... I know I get almost none of the real world ... nicely said ...
4th May 2021 9:54pm
Thank you my friend for the comment. Only wish more would comment here more (Not just for me but others). Hugs ad peace
I encourage people to read and comment as much as possible..... I have learned so very much by reading many many poems here. I feel like doing so has broadened my horizons and perspectives. Leaving comments, well that has mostly been a learning curve. Yet, even the comments I leave seem to have impacted me, too.(hopefully the poet's that I've left them for, as well) I believe it's opened me up to critical thinking and definitely more empathy. To me, it's not about critiquing or being any type of editor, it's about connecting with another human being and letting them know why their words have touched you in a specific way. Like LilD said, it's not something that usually occurs in a daily life so I feel like it's important ... that's just my humble opinion... :)
You are of the same mindset as my own, I believe, Oral... I really appreciate your thoughtfulness here and I hope to see you on my page with your lovely comments in the future... lol 😂.... just saying... I love them too!
Ty for sharing this terrific gem 💎
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
You are of the same mindset as my own, I believe, Oral... I really appreciate your thoughtfulness here and I hope to see you on my page with your lovely comments in the future... lol 😂.... just saying... I love them too!
Ty for sharing this terrific gem 💎
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
4th May 2021 10:09pm
You, my amazing poetic Princess, are so gifted as a comment writer. Thanks for your comment. Hugs, kisses, and peace, oral
Anonymous
4th May 2021 10:52pm
I like it, it is totally an honor to read. not to pounce upon the most crass part, but the toilet stalls getting a mention, that just, to me established such an immediate connection, because I think that's such an intimate thing that people do read the writing is left behind by others in that space, and oft enough in my life for me to notice, I have experienced moments of poignancy in that environment. So thank you for the reminder of both that, and what we are or could be doing while we're commenting
4th May 2021 10:57pm
Thanks, I treasure your comment, thanks for taking time. Hugs and peace. Oral
4th May 2021 10:53pm
I comment to validate those moments
that the poet took to go it with their emotions.
Sometimes complicated commotion
and they are in the ocean drowning.
Frowning on decisions, making incisions too.
Smiling all the while wilding out.
Expressing joy of life or joy of love.
Shoving those words into a sentence.
Dense feeling or light-hearted play.
I love what some poets have to say.
that the poet took to go it with their emotions.
Sometimes complicated commotion
and they are in the ocean drowning.
Frowning on decisions, making incisions too.
Smiling all the while wilding out.
Expressing joy of life or joy of love.
Shoving those words into a sentence.
Dense feeling or light-hearted play.
I love what some poets have to say.
6th May 2021 1:36am
5th May 2021 4:21am
Dear TO,
I admire your openness and ability to appreciate what’s before you without bias or reservation. Just lovely recognition of that poet and whatever they want to put across. Would we could we all be so available and receptive to this the universe would be so much more inviting. Inspirational write. H🌷
I admire your openness and ability to appreciate what’s before you without bias or reservation. Just lovely recognition of that poet and whatever they want to put across. Would we could we all be so available and receptive to this the universe would be so much more inviting. Inspirational write. H🌷
This is certainly another unique poem from you, Oralizer, tackling subjects not many would think to write about. The bottom line is that people at least have or find the confidence to submit.
15th Jun 2021 5:38am
Coz I possess your soul, your mind, your heart and your body...
That's poem for me.
Glad I found this..
Oralizer!
That's poem for me.
Glad I found this..
Oralizer!
15th Jun 2021 2:14pm
