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Love Letter to My Pillow
My neck,
A Puzzle fits
My pillow makes
Such languid lines
Sweet mathematics
A silent add and subtract
Mouth ajar
Breathing, a state of
Reckless abandon.
A Puzzle fits
My pillow makes
Such languid lines
Sweet mathematics
A silent add and subtract
Mouth ajar
Breathing, a state of
Reckless abandon.
Published 2nd May 2021
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2nd May 2021 3:27pm
Love everything about this ... first the title ... "Such lanquid lines/Sweet mathematics/A silent add and subtract" ... pure poetic gold ... closing line brings the poem home ... its open endedness lets the reader/listener wander ... excellent write dear poet ...
2nd May 2021 4:01pm
And an excellent comment too. I hope you are also in love with your pillow. ))
2nd May 2021 4:02pm
Why thank you ... I have a sleep number pillow ... to go along with my sleep number bed ... I take it ... (the pillow, not the bed) ... with me when I travel ... it is that ... fantastic ...
2nd May 2021 4:05pm
4th May 2021 1:40am
This an amazing poem about a pillow, truly. I mean, the pillow does hold your head your head and is there at night for you, so.. yeah. It's awesome.
