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Word Crafting
I look at words
as tools and materials upon a bench
lifting and holding each
weighing it up in consideration,
testing out the ring
to see if it is sound,
knowing that in that short time
if I find it to my liking,
if it just fits,
then I will definitely use it
somehow;
cobbling others around it
satellites and limbs
for the obsessed heart.
Maybe shelving the others away for another day.
as tools and materials upon a bench
lifting and holding each
weighing it up in consideration,
testing out the ring
to see if it is sound,
knowing that in that short time
if I find it to my liking,
if it just fits,
then I will definitely use it
somehow;
cobbling others around it
satellites and limbs
for the obsessed heart.
Maybe shelving the others away for another day.
Published 29th Apr 2021
| Edited 18th Jun 2021
Author's Note
Entry 29 for NaPoWriMo2021.
A small reflective piece on how I sometimes approach writing and using words or phrases.
A small reflective piece on how I sometimes approach writing and using words or phrases.
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18th Jun 2021 3:58am
I like the focus on technical aspects of writing here, how it is a game of testing and trying out words. “Satellites and limbs/for the obsessed heart” meanwhile is a great turn of phrase.
