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ILOVEYOU
Itching to feel your hands on me
Longing to put my lips upon you
Overwhelmed with intense fantasies
Victimized by the lustful aura that you exude
Enticed by your eyes
Yolked in by your agenda
Outnumbered by your body's vies for mine
Useless in my attempt to not surrender
Lost in my thoughts of our past;
Regrets of how our bond didn't last
Wishing that our shortcomings could be undone
But knowing that dream is a victory that won't be won. Trying to decide what path to take now; deciphering the what, who, when, and how. At the end of the day, one thing rings true. When you cross my mind, my heart rings three words:
I Love You.
Longing to put my lips upon you
Overwhelmed with intense fantasies
Victimized by the lustful aura that you exude
Enticed by your eyes
Yolked in by your agenda
Outnumbered by your body's vies for mine
Useless in my attempt to not surrender
Lost in my thoughts of our past;
Regrets of how our bond didn't last
Wishing that our shortcomings could be undone
But knowing that dream is a victory that won't be won. Trying to decide what path to take now; deciphering the what, who, when, and how. At the end of the day, one thing rings true. When you cross my mind, my heart rings three words:
I Love You.
Author's Note
Inspired by my feelings towards my ex
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. ILOVEYOU
28th Apr 2021 6:09am
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- Edited 2nd Apr 2022 3:45am
28th Apr 2021 7:04am
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29th Apr 2021 11:23pm
Yes, especially when you've both acknowledged the past but are not sure what to do in terms of moving forward
Re. ILOVEYOU
28th Apr 2021 9:05am
Great write, flowed beautifully. The pain of losing a love. Great poem
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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28th Apr 2021 1:04pm
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29th Apr 2021 4:24pm
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29th Apr 2021 11:33pm
Great poem, loved the buildup t the last 3 words. Thanks for sharing, Peace, oral
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Re. ILOVEYOU
31st May 2021 4:10am
Now Lionel Richie's Sail On is playing in my head
Something about good times never felt so good
Something about good times never felt so good
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31st May 2021 2:51pm
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20th Sep 2021 9:44am
Memories, good and bad, often drive our writings. Benefit from the good, but remember the bad and learn from them. Poignant poem!
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21st Sep 2021 6:16am