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Unfinished novel
The protagonist
Mr average, with a twist
mend my ways, be the new evangelist.
Smouldering bridges, of bloods misuse
life chewed, with a missing tooth
one chapter, to make good
Mr average, with a twist
mend my ways, be the new evangelist.
Smouldering bridges, of bloods misuse
life chewed, with a missing tooth
one chapter, to make good
Published 20th Apr 2021
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20th Apr 2021 11:41am
20th Apr 2021 11:53am
I really liked how well encapsulated this tiny pill form of poetry made your place in life feel. Powerful last line as well, stuck to your metaphor. Enjoyed.
20th Apr 2021 1:56pm
20th Apr 2021 10:24pm
Love this Slipalong, so clever how you've wrapped the parcel without making the gift obvious, really hard act to follow, you have my vote if it comes to it. Best R
21st Apr 2021 8:57am
21st Apr 2021 9:26am
Na.......your pencil never needed sharpening, I always look forward to reading your work.
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- Edited 13th Sep 2022 5:45pm
25th Apr 2021 2:37am
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25th Apr 2021 10:03am
NO - perhaps I need to attend confession !!!! or a lightening bolt from the poetry god
