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Chaos and Flame
a dragon
a city
chaos and flame
the dragon sighs
voices cry
are flames ever sane?
clueless reptile
never knowing the pain
all it did was sigh,
and yet, flames escaped
Published 12th Apr 2021
Author's Note
A quick poem featuring a metaphor of a dragon breathing fire. I wanted to try something different stylistically as typically I don't write stuff without typical punctuation and structured stanzas.
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12th Apr 2021 9:11pm
I love short crisp lines ... "are flames ever sane" ... poetic gold ... nice flow with this ...
12th Apr 2021 9:16pm
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
26th Apr 2021 8:20pm
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27th Apr 2021 2:19am
4th May 2021 9:06pm
5th May 2021 11:10pm
Thank you and wow what an interesting connection! I always find that writing poetry can be like writing a song sometimes.
6th May 2021 5:50pm
6th Jun 2021 2:27pm
It's inspiring that in your choice of the poetic style there's experimentation
It is not a matter of if the discovery or discoveries will be made
But when that day comes many will share in those enriching treasures
It is not a matter of if the discovery or discoveries will be made
But when that day comes many will share in those enriching treasures
6th Aug 2021 2:23pm
