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JUSTRIPPING

I am just ripping
Open the fabric to catch
Whatever spills out

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 7th Apr 2021

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Re. JUSTRIPPING

7th Apr 2021 4:33am

Dear S,

Lovely. Short sweet and refreshing piece. And I like the play on words. H🌷

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7th Apr 2021 5:44am

Thank you Honoria

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