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Some Mothers do have em.....part II
Mum, hear me cry.
watch me smile.
here’s my first step.
hold my hand.
Mum, dad won’t let me win.
were do the stars go in the day.
will you tell dad.
why is the sea salty.
Mum, are we there yet.
I’m bored.
can we go now.
Muuum, shut up.
Mum, what’s for tea.
is my shirt ironed.
can I have a lift.
can I have some money.
Mum, let me carry your bags.
do you want a cup of tea.
how’s your day been.
I love you.
watch me smile.
here’s my first step.
hold my hand.
Mum, dad won’t let me win.
were do the stars go in the day.
will you tell dad.
why is the sea salty.
Mum, are we there yet.
I’m bored.
can we go now.
Muuum, shut up.
Mum, what’s for tea.
is my shirt ironed.
can I have a lift.
can I have some money.
Mum, let me carry your bags.
do you want a cup of tea.
how’s your day been.
I love you.
Published 29th Mar 2021
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31st Mar 2021 2:56am
Awww... such a lovely turn at the end. ❤
I'm in the "Muuum, shut up" stage now. What a ride it's been so far. I love how you've said just enough to capture the essence at each stage... well done!
I'm in the "Muuum, shut up" stage now. What a ride it's been so far. I love how you've said just enough to capture the essence at each stage... well done!
6th Apr 2021 1:49pm
Many thanks bt for the kind feedback, and don't worry that stage soon passes into the I'm not going phase and then you are child free with someone to look after the dog, best of both worlds. :)
