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Societies Ride Of Judgement..
She peaks over the edge of temptation,
They whisper in her ear,
"One more step my dear",
"All of your worries will disappear",
She takes a of faith leap,
An angel with no wings,
Sirens break everything,
You hear a light smack,
A faint crack,
A soft scream,
Breaking news,
"Girl jumps off 10 story building",
Another suicide to add,
To societies ride of judgment,
Because Society makes pills,
To fix the problems,
It created.
They whisper in her ear,
"One more step my dear",
"All of your worries will disappear",
She takes a of faith leap,
An angel with no wings,
Sirens break everything,
You hear a light smack,
A faint crack,
A soft scream,
Breaking news,
"Girl jumps off 10 story building",
Another suicide to add,
To societies ride of judgment,
Because Society makes pills,
To fix the problems,
It created.
Published 13th Mar 2021
Author's Note
As someone who has dealt with mental health issues, I've realized over time that society doesn't want to fix the real issues. They want to offer just enough for you to get by, if you make it or have the means. Suicide is never the answer but what also isn't the answer is a lack of help and resources.
If you are feeling suicidal please call the "National Suicide Hotline". You are never alone.
If you are feeling suicidal please call the "National Suicide Hotline". You are never alone.
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15th Mar 2021 4:04pm
Your description of jumping and landing in this spill is spot on!
Very good spill with respect to the subject.
As a person who tried 5 x's and ever got unlucky (or fortunate) and discovered (once in the USAF) the struggle of suicidal ideation is real. (i've called the US Veteran's helpline many times).
Appreciate Your info in the author's note section, as well.
Very good spill with respect to the subject.
As a person who tried 5 x's and ever got unlucky (or fortunate) and discovered (once in the USAF) the struggle of suicidal ideation is real. (i've called the US Veteran's helpline many times).
Appreciate Your info in the author's note section, as well.
22nd Mar 2021 10:11pm
This so very much reminds me of the song, You found me by The Fray. As, someone is dealing with Mental Health issues, I can so relate to this. It hits home for me.
