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Between Spaces
Between Spaces
That space
We think
Is always there
Is often
Made
Invisible
By something
Just
As really smart,
Its counterfeit,
The human
Heart.
That space
We think
Is always there
Is often
Made
Invisible
By something
Just
As really smart,
Its counterfeit,
The human
Heart.
Published 10th Mar 2021
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Who would we all be without our flaws?
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10th Mar 2021 9:37pm
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11th Mar 2021 00:10am
Well, you’ve been away for a while Mr running turtle... 🙂
I liked the closing lines to this — the idea of the human heart being counterfeit adds this level of experience to your words.
Welcome back :)
-M
I liked the closing lines to this — the idea of the human heart being counterfeit adds this level of experience to your words.
Welcome back :)
-M
12th Mar 2021 9:28pm
Thanks...welding pieces back on...
Reason believes itself to be supreme except that it cannot account for a consciousness without emotion.....whatelse is training then except our constantly and preventively clarifying our own sense of reality from within? The school of hard knocks....
Same page....IMHO, -M.
Reason believes itself to be supreme except that it cannot account for a consciousness without emotion.....whatelse is training then except our constantly and preventively clarifying our own sense of reality from within? The school of hard knocks....
Same page....IMHO, -M.
30th Apr 2021 2:57am
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