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Burning

I can't breathe
My vision is blurry
All I see are blurs
Of red, orange, and yellow
I tried to breathe
But only toxic smoke
Filling my lungs
Choking me
I can't find them
I'm all alone
And I'm going to die
I use the last bit of my air
And scream
My voice was dry
I could barely hear it myself
Then everything goes black
I feel my body growing weak
Then I feel it
I'm in someone's arms
Who can it be?
God?
Written by Lonely_Girl (Angeles Morocho)
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