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Leaving the mark
Leaving the mark
Claws running down the spine, dug in to make a mark, left within the throws of passion, desire was the spark
Teeth scrapped across the flesh, teeth buried into skin, biting down on their body, full of lust and sin
Bruises upon the skin, going through the shades of black and blue, caused by paddle, a hand or perhaps a floppy shoe
Crop marks across the skin, they really, really sting, the straight lines on the arse, pain and pleasure is what it brings
Each mark is a ownership, it shows that you belong, some lasts for ages, then some don't last to long
Everytime they feel the bruise, or see the mark upon their skin, gives them a sweet reminder, of their night of sin
Whether they are love bites, or bruises left deep within the skin, they are fed by a desire and a love from deep within
Ron
Claws running down the spine, dug in to make a mark, left within the throws of passion, desire was the spark
Teeth scrapped across the flesh, teeth buried into skin, biting down on their body, full of lust and sin
Bruises upon the skin, going through the shades of black and blue, caused by paddle, a hand or perhaps a floppy shoe
Crop marks across the skin, they really, really sting, the straight lines on the arse, pain and pleasure is what it brings
Each mark is a ownership, it shows that you belong, some lasts for ages, then some don't last to long
Everytime they feel the bruise, or see the mark upon their skin, gives them a sweet reminder, of their night of sin
Whether they are love bites, or bruises left deep within the skin, they are fed by a desire and a love from deep within
Ron
Published 7th Mar 2021
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Love on the skin
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7th Mar 2021 9:34pm
It's a deep commitment, an abundant amount of trust, a mutual respect and an understanding of the wants and needs of the individual Dom/sub dynamic...that are in the wings of this type of fucking / connection / relationship
I believe each dynamic is different, just like people are individuals and because there's various interpretations, some may see BDSM in one way that I might not necessarily agree with and vice versa. I'm not talking about your write, just in general. I feel like parts of my personality are ingrained and that feeds off of my submissiveness. I cherish being a sub and see it as a source of light, release, goodness and a lifestyle that makes me feel wanted, confident and happy. The pain or marks (which are really a small part of it) aren't wanted (desired) from a place of darkness but from a place of self awareness and personal heightened sexual desire. I think that thoroughly understanding one's self and one's own needs is imperative to understanding bdsm and it's outlets that are important and needed... at least that's my humble opinion...
(sorry for the droning!! lol...) Whoops! ðŸ¤
I enjoyed the thought provoking, Ron...
hahaha
(let me know if this is too much and I'll edit...)
It just spilled forth!
I adore you and I thank you for sharing
Much love and respect
🌹 💜 🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
S
I believe each dynamic is different, just like people are individuals and because there's various interpretations, some may see BDSM in one way that I might not necessarily agree with and vice versa. I'm not talking about your write, just in general. I feel like parts of my personality are ingrained and that feeds off of my submissiveness. I cherish being a sub and see it as a source of light, release, goodness and a lifestyle that makes me feel wanted, confident and happy. The pain or marks (which are really a small part of it) aren't wanted (desired) from a place of darkness but from a place of self awareness and personal heightened sexual desire. I think that thoroughly understanding one's self and one's own needs is imperative to understanding bdsm and it's outlets that are important and needed... at least that's my humble opinion...
(sorry for the droning!! lol...) Whoops! ðŸ¤
I enjoyed the thought provoking, Ron...
hahaha
(let me know if this is too much and I'll edit...)
It just spilled forth!
I adore you and I thank you for sharing
Much love and respect
🌹 💜 🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
S
7th Mar 2021 9:40pm
Wow thats a amazing review I love it. I'm so excited that my poem produced such a review
Thank you.
Love and light
Ron xxx
Thank you.
Love and light
Ron xxx
9th Mar 2021 7:04am
Brilliant Ron and I think Blue said more than I could say and better dammit!
Richard
Richard
9th Mar 2021 8:20am
