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STEAMY WINDOWS
He slowly rubbed an ice cube
all over her
sexual places ,
then her neck and boobs.
Then he would kiss her warm spots
. slowly used the ice
AGAIN AND AGAIN
My delicious torture
The slowness of it
led to such a huge buildup.
FOR. MY
STEAMY WINDOWS
all over her
sexual places ,
then her neck and boobs.
Then he would kiss her warm spots
. slowly used the ice
AGAIN AND AGAIN
My delicious torture
The slowness of it
led to such a huge buildup.
FOR. MY
STEAMY WINDOWS
Published 4th Mar 2021
Author's Note
LUCKY CAR
AFTER IM DONE
I NEED A CAR WASH
AFTER IM DONE
I NEED A CAR WASH
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5th Mar 2021 00:04am
Mmm.. and yes a lucky occupant after I'm done... very nicely stated my poet
5th Mar 2021 1:37am
Look like the scene from Titanic where Jack and Rose are making Love. Keep on writing. Give it everything you got.
5th Mar 2021 5:55am
Took memory to that scene in the Titanic too. Also Tina Turner's song 'Steamy Windows'.
6th Mar 2021 3:30am
6th Mar 2021 2:53pm
STEAMY! Oh how the slow torture leads to a huge buildup and explosive ... need for a car wash. ;) But the car is definitely not the lucky one in this. Just saying. Great picture but the words steamed me up. :p
9th Mar 2021 4:38pm
