covet. (a reading)

It's a fantastic poem. Why would you be embarrass by it?

Ty, DC .. l'm easily affected and just too damn sensitive, at times.... is the short answer.
I am grateful for your list add and your thoughtful comments... means a lot to me
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xoxo

From your mouth to the winds of future! Ty so much for reading and the list add, Wilber... I, am the total fortunate one, though.. To have your friendship, your kindness and lovely visits to look f
forward to, is more than one ever thought was possible here... I appreciate it and always love seeing you, brc it's a guaranteed smile maker! ☺
Much love and smiles,
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xo
B

OMG this is beautiful the reading is absolutely beautiful
This is your best read so far I'm mesmerized by the poem and your voice. Thank you for sharing
Love and light
Ron x

Sir Ron,
You're so awesome and incredibly sweet. I can't thank you enough for your kind words, the list add, and your truly amazing encouragement. I always feel like you are there, even if I'm down and out... I am so full of appreciation and I'm so humbled as well. My darkened heart swells a little bit within all your thoughtfulness.
Ty Ty!
Much love,
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-S

Susan this poem is a sublimely alluring wonderment.
Your romantic poetry soothes my troubled mind with an enchanting ease.
I could not have asked for a better read to brighten my spirit.
Your cadence and flow is simply magical with this exquisite write.
I absolutely adore your tone and graceful delivery with this rhythmic poetry of love.
This beautiful write strikes the perfect chord of seduction
with the charm and grace that only a true blue poetess can deliver.
I can feel your desire from each measured emotional word that touch your lips.
There really is absolutely no better way to start my day, then with splendid poetry.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem Susan!
Magical Magnificence !!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughtful remarks, Ron. I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it didn't sound too ridiculous. I appreciate the list add and as always your visits are a breath of encouragement and a joyous light of hopefulness.
A light my darkness needs, especially recently.
I am glad I was able to start your day off on a good note... that's so awesome to read.
Much love, Ron
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xoxo
B

this spill sent my thinking and past thinkings from a comment to comment of my feel to a most recent feel (poem) of Yours...........
i side with all above --
this is a wonderful spill & as i am beginning to realize (via Your chats regarding my old spill.....) even our older feelings and / or thoughts carry much weight to our present and still relevant.

Awww. Thank you Tallen.
I appreciate you reading and your thoughtful comments. I'm am so glad you and I are in tune ;)
Love seeing you visit my friend, please don't be a stranger!!
Much love,
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xo

“forged/from wishes/of eyes/sealed/so very/tight” ... phenomenal use of line breaks ... throughout ... but this stanza in particular ... the poem demands your pause ... that you listen ... so skillfully poeted ... love it ... start to finish ...

Dearest S,
I can't thank you enough for that! I have been so down on myself and your comments are like a salve to my psyche. If anyone's thoughts carry my upmost respect, it's yours. (no pressure, though.. lmao!!) I'm so appreciative that you enjoyed reading /listening - I'm almost teary (silly Blue!) with such warmth and gratitude. The generous list add, too.
I'm blown away and humbled, my friend
Much love!
(and Omg, Jade is SO BIG!.. love the avatar)
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xo
-S

Dearest, Blue
Embarrassed? Hell no🔥 Why be embarrassed by this beautifully written, especially passionate piece? It's a gem. This passage makes me feel good all over,
"safely
encircle'd
in arms
complete
in your heat"
A sense of security and tender sensuality is what every genuine lover yearns to convey.
I believe that you describe the litmus test for true and abiding love with this passage,
"strength of conviction
precious
and rare
revealing
true character"
Combining your deeply romantic verse, your mellifluous voice, perfect music, and the use of one of my favorite whimsical words, "kismet, " (reminds me of  Gidget for some reason) and you have made me fall in love with this poem Bravissima sweet BB ❣️❣️

My goodness... I need to steady myself, as I'm left breathless from your truly magical comments, BB!!
Just Wow! I can't think of anything, off the top of my head that feels better (except THAT) than when I read that my words were able to make you feel good all over. It's an astounding piece of knowledge, that is. You were able to take a scowling Blue and instantly have me in giggles 🤭 .. lol and going "Awww" like a school girl.... hahahaha. I'm so very glad you enjoyed listening as much as you did. My heart soars and my smile is so very goofy... My appreciative for you- and for the way you are able to turn me around, helping me to alleviate self doubt, leaving me shining in all your inspirational kindness.... is limitless.
I'm so lucky and I completely know it. ;)
Ty Ty Ty, BB!
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I don't take any of it for granted, either.
Much love and respect
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xo
-S

Wow, Lady Blue❣❣ You really touched me witn your response 🐻👅🐻👅🐻👅🐻

Wonderful to hear, BB because likewise to your first comments. Really
(hugs)
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xoxo

Damn hot poem.  Hope you felt good.  Keep on writing.

Lol.... that's kinda awesome... I don't think of myself as damn hot, so much thanks, there.. Francisco!
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You are a damn hot woman.

Awww... Ty for that, Francisco
I am blushing!
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xo

I happy that you are happy because you truly a strong beautiful hot smart woman.

:)
Ty, my friend
That's very kind

This had my goosebumps rising. Drying out my lips in need of water. You surely are one of the best.

You are a very nice man...Adagio...
Since I've been berating myself a bit the last few days, I'm going to bask in your thoughtfulness a bit and your thirst... I needed that boost more than you know... I appreciate you reading /listening and taking the time to leave your remarks.
It's not ever taken lightly or for granted, my friend.. Much love,
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xo

You write nicely and have a nice voice.  I like this.

Thank you very much, I appreciate that. So glad you enjoyed it ;)
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xo

Blue this read like a song I never wanted to end. Truly a sublime love poem that takes me rolling through elysian fields. Thoroughly enjoyed every nuance and note in this gorgeous dream of a poem.

John

Bravo Blue, excellent verse. Loved the rhyme scheme and flow to it. The reading was a beautiful compliment (along with the background music).
Outstanding work.

Thank you for reading and listening, Wally.. I'm so appreciative for your time and all the kind words. I am so happy you enjoyed it ;)
Much love and respect,
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xo