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Her Love Brings Out the Colors
temptation for another has been fleeting
when exploring deeper
found only disappointment
velvet flames burn
but there’s no truth in their colors
knowing love makes lust look insignificant
when searching for who’s been there for me
it’s you that always comes to mind
igniting a supernova within
on the days I feel less than special
you show me hope again
always knowing how to make me smile
red lipstick, blue dress, and makeup
forcing me out of the house
and out on the town
some dinner and dancing
being in love with my best friend
is a gift I'll forever be grateful for
looking at those beautiful hazel eyes
brings tears to mine
laying your curly hair on my shoulder
no longer needing fantasy
I’m living the greatest dream
many words I could say
like, “with you I found my missing piece”
but no words could ever explain
so I’ll just hold tight to your hand
and keep the best moments between us
when exploring deeper
found only disappointment
velvet flames burn
but there’s no truth in their colors
knowing love makes lust look insignificant
when searching for who’s been there for me
it’s you that always comes to mind
igniting a supernova within
on the days I feel less than special
you show me hope again
always knowing how to make me smile
red lipstick, blue dress, and makeup
forcing me out of the house
and out on the town
some dinner and dancing
being in love with my best friend
is a gift I'll forever be grateful for
looking at those beautiful hazel eyes
brings tears to mine
laying your curly hair on my shoulder
no longer needing fantasy
I’m living the greatest dream
many words I could say
like, “with you I found my missing piece”
but no words could ever explain
so I’ll just hold tight to your hand
and keep the best moments between us
Published 25th Feb 2021
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
25th Feb 2021 10:08am
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25th Feb 2021 10:40am
Thank you 😁 I originally had color code to some of the words but they don't seem to work on this site anymore 🙁. Very much appreciate the read and comment.
Ohhh DC,
I'm basking in the hopefulness your words have left me with... just so lovely. I enjoy your writing, so. This was much needed, for me this morning.
Ty so much for sharing 💜
🌹
xo
I'm basking in the hopefulness your words have left me with... just so lovely. I enjoy your writing, so. This was much needed, for me this morning.
Ty so much for sharing 💜
🌹
xo
26th Feb 2021 9:02am
I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. It's always nice to read your comments. I wish I could of got the color coding to work on this poem, but oh well.
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25th Feb 2021 4:29pm
Dear DC,
I must echo all the above comments as they’re so on target. This poem is so touching and heart warming and most importantly hopeful. I can’t tell you what a tonic it was to read this sweetness just now. H🌷
I must echo all the above comments as they’re so on target. This poem is so touching and heart warming and most importantly hopeful. I can’t tell you what a tonic it was to read this sweetness just now. H🌷
26th Feb 2021 9:03am
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27th Feb 2021 3:39am
27th Feb 2021 9:04am
1st Mar 2021 1:08pm
Such a beautiful heart you have Devilschild. "knowing love makes lust insignificant" such an amazing line. I really do love lust though. :) "On the days I feel less special you show me hope again" If only everyone could have this feeling. "With you I found my missing piece" That last stanza makes the heart skip a beat... more like stop for a minute to take it in but in a good way. lol I suppose if you are going to die then doing it with this feeling would be the way to go. It really brought this home in a truly magnificent way. You are truly deeply romantic and it is so great that you have found someone who can complete you. What a lovely read to start the day while in a meeting... :p
3rd Mar 2021 6:37am
That's such a great comment. It's awesome to have such a love.
Thanks for the read 😁
Thanks for the read 😁
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Jul 2022 4:45pm
16th Mar 2021 7:39am
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