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imaginary world
yearning for that something
a love I'll never have
faces I'll never get to hold
ill never get to hear your laugh
the clownery that I commit
dreaming of things that cannot be
like the cigarettes you never lit
it burns my heart because It's not real
a love I'll never have
faces I'll never get to hold
ill never get to hear your laugh
the clownery that I commit
dreaming of things that cannot be
like the cigarettes you never lit
it burns my heart because It's not real
Published 18th Feb 2021
Author's Note
this poem is dedicated to my maladaptive daydreaming for making me love people I've never met and will never have :')
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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18th Feb 2021 3:55am
18th Feb 2021 8:35am
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18th Feb 2021 6:24am
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18th Feb 2021 8:38am
5th Jun 2021 3:25am
People who exist only in imagination
Kind of like online friends that people never meet in real life
Strange how life works
Even sad
Kind of like online friends that people never meet in real life
Strange how life works
Even sad
6th Jun 2021 7:08am
6th Jun 2021 7:08am
6th Oct 2021 2:44pm
nice structure
good flow..
some cadence and metering
(syllable count)
relatable subject
good stuff
keep it going
OG Respect
good flow..
some cadence and metering
(syllable count)
relatable subject
good stuff
keep it going
OG Respect
6th Oct 2021 2:52pm
