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supernova iii
..there.s poetry in knives carving at bone dust..
..if you realize there was no other event taking presedence..
..when summer immorally laid herself fully down upon us..
(pretend to see something relevant)
..there.s an art to survival..
..we were madmen to have existed..
..we are monsters to have remained here..
(pretend that you see something relevant)
..if you realize there was no other event taking presedence..
..when summer immorally laid herself fully down upon us..
(pretend to see something relevant)
..there.s an art to survival..
..we were madmen to have existed..
..we are monsters to have remained here..
(pretend that you see something relevant)
Published 20th Jan 2010
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Anonymous
20th Jan 2010 1:26pm
"..we were madmen to have existed..
..we are monsters to have remained here.."
Those lines are simultaneously beautiful and depressingly insightful. And the opening "..there.s poetry in knives" segment really draws the reader in. A cynical and painfully honest piece.
..we are monsters to have remained here.."
Those lines are simultaneously beautiful and depressingly insightful. And the opening "..there.s poetry in knives" segment really draws the reader in. A cynical and painfully honest piece.
20th Jan 2010 2:56pm
yeah I like those "madmen/monster" lines too.. I wrote these supernova poems with a girl in mind it was also around the time I started yelling lyrics and recording them to make into songs.. a few of which I did.. and I do want to make more ambientgrind as I call it.. they say nothings new but sometimes you can wrangle out something inspired and interesting.. my mixing ambient music and grindcore is my own creation which im proud of.. oh I dont think this one made it to a song.. but one of the supernovas I did yell and its in pieces on my computer waiting to be turned into music cheers
