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Freed
You don’t even know that you saved me
From my own self
I never once knew
That my freedom
Was in the hands of someone else
You caught me at a great time
Because I felt myself slipping
I was on the edge of my own demise
Right before I lost my gripping
You caught me
Right before I jumped
Into the world of the unliving
Though I was alive
I felt dead inside
No feeling of life
Within me
You freed me from my mentality
Of being a slave
You broke those chains
You took me out of the darkest shadows
Of my own dreadful cave
I didn’t know that I needed saving
Until I had one foot in my grave..
God knew I needed you
I have him to thank
I’ve been drowned by my own sorrows
If you hadn’t pulled me out I would have sank
I was already so deep in...
I never thought I’d come out
But you freed me from my
Insecurities and self doubt
Yes you freed me
You freed me and I’ll never go back
As long as you are in my life
I know just that....
I am freed.
- Poetic Gawdess
From my own self
I never once knew
That my freedom
Was in the hands of someone else
You caught me at a great time
Because I felt myself slipping
I was on the edge of my own demise
Right before I lost my gripping
You caught me
Right before I jumped
Into the world of the unliving
Though I was alive
I felt dead inside
No feeling of life
Within me
You freed me from my mentality
Of being a slave
You broke those chains
You took me out of the darkest shadows
Of my own dreadful cave
I didn’t know that I needed saving
Until I had one foot in my grave..
God knew I needed you
I have him to thank
I’ve been drowned by my own sorrows
If you hadn’t pulled me out I would have sank
I was already so deep in...
I never thought I’d come out
But you freed me from my
Insecurities and self doubt
Yes you freed me
You freed me and I’ll never go back
As long as you are in my life
I know just that....
I am freed.
- Poetic Gawdess
Published 12th Feb 2021
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16th Feb 2021 1:16am
It can be so hard for us as people especially the ones who are gifted (writers). So many things haunt our imaginations and the innocence of poetry that we just need someone to talk to or a corner to crawl to just to vent. I feel you on this piece and I too feel the same way sometimes. My inner peace with myself is often smothered by all the negativity in the world and around me. Very great piece my fellow poetess. I am looking forward to more of your work. Sexy Joe
