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possibly an early manic episode
the taste
of blood on my lip
the irregular vice of teeth
uncontrollably
i chew a piece of flesh
like gum
the vessels
are so very close to the skin
i send a suggestive text
and almost collapse
at the mere
thought
of giving head
of blood on my lip
the irregular vice of teeth
uncontrollably
i chew a piece of flesh
like gum
the vessels
are so very close to the skin
i send a suggestive text
and almost collapse
at the mere
thought
of giving head
Author's Note
honestly very hard to tell if my early works are oblique references to drugs or manic episodes so like i dont know if this is even the right category
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Re. possibly an early manic episode
11th Feb 2021 2:38am
thank you raconteur always a pleasure
i think I’ll take you up on the offer to send a folio of your poetry , ive got over my paranoia... mostly
i think I’ll take you up on the offer to send a folio of your poetry , ive got over my paranoia... mostly
Re. possibly an early manic episode
11th Feb 2021 2:38am
I have to say there really is not much in it for the giver
Maybe just suffering an overdose of wanting to please?
But what do I could possibly know
Maybe just suffering an overdose of wanting to please?
But what do I could possibly know
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Re: Re. possibly an early manic episode
11th Feb 2021 2:40am
Re: Re. possibly an early manic episode
11th Feb 2021 8:25pm
I once practiced on a cucumber,
But I bit it
Fortunenatly I had some ranch.
But I bit it
Fortunenatly I had some ranch.
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Re. possibly an early manic episode
11th Feb 2021 11:38am
you are unearthing old work? feels primal.
occasionally i like to pull old work i never finished and either edit or use as a prompt...i find it brave to do so, observing where my head was at at the time of original write, and often scratching my head haha.
the above is quite visceral, suggestive, and feels like you are describing a trigger event...but lights up images of whoever received that text! :)!
you are a very powerful writer...but im sure you dont need me to tell you that.
occasionally i like to pull old work i never finished and either edit or use as a prompt...i find it brave to do so, observing where my head was at at the time of original write, and often scratching my head haha.
the above is quite visceral, suggestive, and feels like you are describing a trigger event...but lights up images of whoever received that text! :)!
you are a very powerful writer...but im sure you dont need me to tell you that.
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Re: Re. possibly an early manic episode
11th Feb 2021 11:42am
yes im trying to focus more on real life, finding work and putting together my new concept album collection and a reprint of my resumé.
still need my du fix
thank you for your kind words x
still need my du fix
thank you for your kind words x
Re: Re. possibly an early manic episode
11th Feb 2021 12:38pm
oh, real life...always the dilemma haha.
i dont mean to pry...but...new concept album?? music? or a collection of words? do tell if you are so inclined :).
i dont mean to pry...but...new concept album?? music? or a collection of words? do tell if you are so inclined :).
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Re: Re. possibly an early manic episode
11th Feb 2021 12:48pm
it’s a book of love poems kind of showing my growth through three relationships, I’ve got all the words done but i need to sort out format, illustrations, printing
Re: Re. possibly an early manic episode
11th Feb 2021 12:51pm
thank you for sharing. excellent idea and concept...best of luck! go for it!
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11th Feb 2021 12:53pm
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Re. possibly an early manic episode
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