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State of mind
Imprisoned by four my walls,
Imprisoned in my mind
To scared to search through my thoughts
Afraid of what I'll find,
For in my thoughts are there bad things
That are sure to ruin your day
If you took a look inside my mind
I'm sure you'll pass away
In my mind you're sure to find
a predator killing its pray...
... But that predator is me
and I am ashamed
But I swear I'll make them Rue the day
Imprisoned in my mind
To scared to search through my thoughts
Afraid of what I'll find,
For in my thoughts are there bad things
That are sure to ruin your day
If you took a look inside my mind
I'm sure you'll pass away
In my mind you're sure to find
a predator killing its pray...
... But that predator is me
and I am ashamed
But I swear I'll make them Rue the day
Published 4th Feb 2021
Author's Note
Open to interpretation, it's a personal pain... I welcome all feedback
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4th Feb 2021 6:39pm
Very honest, Phenomenal. We all have 'intrusive' thoughts from time to time. Saw your message in the welcome party so thought I'd better comment.
Anonymous
4th Feb 2021 7:26pm
Fear is ever consuming, till we look at it. It's also imprisoned within those four walls but only darkened when we don't shine some light on them. Nice write
4th Feb 2021 8:01pm
4th Feb 2021 8:44pm
Are you a killer, is this a confession of sorts lol..
Interesting and somewhat deep write...
Honest too
Interesting and somewhat deep write...
Honest too
7th Feb 2021 8:50pm
Man I have battles with my thoughts everyday. I try not to let the negative consume me. I truly relate to this poem and had to add it to my reading list✊🏽✊🏽
