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Surprise

The evening had been a pleasure
We had danced and talked without measure
We had become friends by the end,
Would the relationship extend?
 
She had asked me for coffee at her flat,
So that we could extend our chat,
Coffee made, we'd chastely discussed
How friendships depend on trust,
 
She then took me by surprise,
She stripped naked before my eyes,
'I trust you to love and not offend.
Please be my lover and my friend.'
Written by gardenlover
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