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A Challenge
Have you ever felt so confused,
yet so sure of your soul?
Do you know yourself
as well as your mind tells you?
Is your heart as warm
as your mother would want?
Will you remember your name,
after everyone else has forgotten?
yet so sure of your soul?
Do you know yourself
as well as your mind tells you?
Is your heart as warm
as your mother would want?
Will you remember your name,
after everyone else has forgotten?
Published 8th Feb 2012
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8th Feb 2012 7:17pm
as long as i Have Jesus my Soul is safe
because He Defines me in any time or place
& i think my mother is proud of the Love i give to others
& because of that i am certain they wont forget the name of this brother....
because He Defines me in any time or place
& i think my mother is proud of the Love i give to others
& because of that i am certain they wont forget the name of this brother....
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2012 5:25pm
you wrote such beautiful lines in this brilliant poem, sometimes i ask myself the same questions, with always the same answers. to know am safe from the hell fires of Satan i just talk to God about my short comings, and i know God well never forget my name even though others will forget who and what i am. a good poem everybody should read this and then ponder about their lives
23rd Feb 2012 9:37pm
