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On Some Planet With Stars Above me
Opened my eyes and
found myself on some planet
with stars above me.
found myself on some planet
with stars above me.
Published 22nd Jan 2021
Author's Note
This haiku poem is about what a man has seen after he opened his eyes.
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23rd Jan 2021 2:55am
Dear GA,
This is quite a reflective poem in that I found myself thinking what it might be like to have been transported to another planet and waking up there. Then I thought some days I wake up on this planet and think similarly. It’s a lovely write with fantastic imagery and possible outcomes for interesting responses. H🌷
This is quite a reflective poem in that I found myself thinking what it might be like to have been transported to another planet and waking up there. Then I thought some days I wake up on this planet and think similarly. It’s a lovely write with fantastic imagery and possible outcomes for interesting responses. H🌷
23rd Jan 2021 1:49pm
25th Jan 2021 00:08am
there has to be different worlds up there and there are many different worlds on earth and we take
too much for granted and never see very clearly
too much for granted and never see very clearly
25th Jan 2021 1:13pm
25th Jan 2021 4:14pm
well I may not have got it right but one person can have their thoughts and another person can have different ones but some off those I can't understand very well I wouldn't have said nothing if I didn't think I was getting close and it is a cool poem and I thank you
26th Jan 2021 1:58am
