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Wintry Beauty
daylight fading
a flooded field
photographer’s hour
the subdued glow of sunset
reflecting on the water
a call for reflection
an evening breeze
a hint of spring
a promise of better times ahead
a flooded field
photographer’s hour
the subdued glow of sunset
reflecting on the water
a call for reflection
an evening breeze
a hint of spring
a promise of better times ahead
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Re. Wintry Beauty
I LOVE this.
I almost wish you didn't have L3 in S2, Lozzamus. It seems somewhat intrusive. That's a beautiful couplet on its own.
I almost wish you didn't have L3 in S2, Lozzamus. It seems somewhat intrusive. That's a beautiful couplet on its own.
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14th Jan 2021 10:34pm
Thanks very much for commenting, Ahavati.
I see your point re: L3 in S2 "call to contemplation". It's always difficult to know what to include- hence the ruthless edits.
Hope you are well.
I see your point re: L3 in S2 "call to contemplation". It's always difficult to know what to include- hence the ruthless edits.
Hope you are well.
Re. Wintry Beauty
14th Jan 2021 8:16am
Very dear Lozzamus,
It's a very beautiful poem and a great picture. It's a call for a deep reflection on life, death and resurrection.
It's a very beautiful poem and a great picture. It's a call for a deep reflection on life, death and resurrection.
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14th Jan 2021 10:35pm
Re. Wintry Beauty
15th Jan 2021 7:22am
Dear L,
I love winter. I know most people don’t but I find a quiet beauty that is pure while everything else in nature sleeps. I totally appreciated your nod to reflection during this season because it’s the perfect time to do just that. Then when spring does arrive we’re rested and ready. Love this prayerful poem. H🌷
I love winter. I know most people don’t but I find a quiet beauty that is pure while everything else in nature sleeps. I totally appreciated your nod to reflection during this season because it’s the perfect time to do just that. Then when spring does arrive we’re rested and ready. Love this prayerful poem. H🌷
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15th Jan 2021 10:15pm
That's great, Honoria. Thanks very much for commenting and adding the writing to your reading list.
Re. Wintry Beauty
14th Aug 2021 11:53am
dear Lozzamus
it's painterly indeed when wintry brush strokes are disarmed by horizon and hope
a warm smile
silent lotus
it's painterly indeed when wintry brush strokes are disarmed by horizon and hope
a warm smile
silent lotus
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14th Aug 2021 11:28pm
Thanks, silent lotus. It's good to see a comment on a poem published some months ago. I hope you are well and have kept safe during the uncertainty of these Pandemic months.
Best wishes,
Lawrence
Best wishes,
Lawrence
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15th Aug 2021 1:31am
dear Lomazzamus
rummaging in archives often results in nice discoveries
thankyuuu for your well wishes
me and my close ones have so far been fortunate to have side stepped the ills of Covid ,,, and all blessed to have gotten vaccinated early on
rummaging in archives often results in nice discoveries
thankyuuu for your well wishes
me and my close ones have so far been fortunate to have side stepped the ills of Covid ,,, and all blessed to have gotten vaccinated early on
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2022 3:57pm
Beautiful

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11th Dec 2022 9:09pm