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A Kiss
The warm embrace
and sultry kiss.
A wonderful moment,
you didn’t realize
how much you’d miss.
Now that it is gone
all you can do is reminisce.
The memory
a source of bliss.
Although, there is
also a feeling of abyss.
Why in the moment
did you dismiss?
and sultry kiss.
A wonderful moment,
you didn’t realize
how much you’d miss.
Now that it is gone
all you can do is reminisce.
The memory
a source of bliss.
Although, there is
also a feeling of abyss.
Why in the moment
did you dismiss?
Published 8th Jan 2021
Author's Note
Life Experiences and Observations
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8th Jan 2021 3:17am
Because being strung along by someone with an identity crisis just isn't my thing.
8th Jan 2021 3:21am
8th Jan 2021 3:50am
10th Jan 2021 4:20pm
It could be dual meaning - I'll let the reader decide or maybe the reader has others: (a) Why didn't you savor the moment while it was occurring, or (b) why did the relationship end by one party being cast off.
8th Jan 2021 3:50am
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.. and I am quite sure the beautiful ride was worth the sweetest fall my wandering poet.. So, savor on the reminisce it sometimes brings the sweetest rewards, what an incredibly soft serenade
10th Jan 2021 4:17pm
It is always on honor to have your words grace my submission page. Thank-you for reading and commenting; and the night in Italy.
11th Jan 2021 2:01am
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10th Jan 2021 4:44pm
The morning in Italy was referred as a time zone. ...delayed because of unexpected requests of family members to run errands for them. And trying to stay focused right now
13th Feb 2021 5:40am
It feels bittersweet. I love the moment and I miss the moment, and I'm sad that I didn't give the moment more value?
28th Feb 2021 4:42am
Anonymous
1st May 2021 11:52pm
One of my favorites I've read so far.
Peace
Bella
Peace
Bella
Wow, thanks. Glad you enjoyed.
There are much better poets than I on this site. Enjoy exploring.
There are much better poets than I on this site. Enjoy exploring.
2nd May 2021 4:46pm
to cherish and remember each kiss and feel the void after lips separate, i dig this
6th Jun 2021 1:34am
Anonymous
21st May 2021 9:50am
Yes, I do miss the moment after its gone.
21st May 2021 8:49pm
6th May 2022 5:41pm
Digging the rhyme scheme. The bliss of a kiss is powerful, looking back missing that moment is such "doh" wise words of Homer J. Simpson, enjoying your write.
LJ
LJ
6th May 2022 10:10pm
6th May 2022 10:39pm
Haha well awesome! I liked it that much! I was looking for something I hadn't commented on yet and I must have missed myself scrolling through.
LJ
LJ
6th Jul 2022 1:08am
6th Jul 2022 4:59pm
26th Jul 2022 1:11am
There is nothing as sensual as kiss.
Nothing more memorable when
it’s perfect. Nothing so missed when it gone because it a gateway to a loving future or a sweet goodbye.
Enjoyed the write
~NE~
Nothing more memorable when
it’s perfect. Nothing so missed when it gone because it a gateway to a loving future or a sweet goodbye.
Enjoyed the write
~NE~
26th Jul 2022 1:15pm
Anonymous
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24th Mar 2023 4:38pm
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24th Mar 2023 11:46pm
Thank you so much Brandy for the wonderful comment. As they say, Hindsight is 20 20.
