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TOWARDS THE NEXT LINE OF TRUTH
TOWARDS THE NEXT LINE OF TRUTH
Truth tickling the keys of reality
opening up the next entrance of entrancing
dancing fingers flying towards the next
escapade flowing in a reality serenade
SENT OUT IN TRUTH
upon all who happens to listen
at the glistening notes, slappin' and gliding
upon the sliding songbirds of past life and youth
TOWARDS THE NEXT LINE OF TRUTH
Truth tickling the keys of reality
opening up the next entrance of entrancing
dancing fingers flying towards the next
escapade flowing in a reality serenade
SENT OUT IN TRUTH
upon all who happens to listen
at the glistening notes, slappin' and gliding
upon the sliding songbirds of past life and youth
TOWARDS THE NEXT LINE OF TRUTH
Published 6th Jan 2021
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6th Jan 2021 7:27am
You write too many lines in a row, the audience loses interest. That is why so many songs have a monotonous chorus to bore us and to repeat itself. I am not a musician. Keep repeating what I say with a repetitive group of simple guitar chords ,
And you got the next line, little bitch.......
And you got the next line, little bitch.......
9th Jan 2021 8:28am
