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Cabotage
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Cabotage
I stroll on within my territory
I stroll up to my old age
No place like home
Now I've got to be free
It has been like living someone else's life
It causes me to question my own perceived journeys
Cabotage
The remaining years
The riverside avenue...
The riverside avenue flanked on both sides by trees
Travelling ...
Travelling like a shadow in the shade they offer
Within the cooling effect they have
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Cabotage
I stroll on within my territory
I stroll up to my old age
No place like home
Now I've got to be free
It has been like living someone else's life
It causes me to question my own perceived journeys
Cabotage
The remaining years
The riverside avenue...
The riverside avenue flanked on both sides by trees
Travelling ...
Travelling like a shadow in the shade they offer
Within the cooling effect they have
... ... ... ...
Published 6th Jan 2021
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6th Jan 2021 1:19am
I feel this captures well the years we spend after learning to forget the falsehoods we believed while getting there
An enjoyed read, poet
An enjoyed read, poet
Thank you for your comment, Amorous_tryst.
Thank you for adding this poem to your reading list.
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But I did not mean *falsehoods*
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"... my own perceived journeys... " suggests journeys online, mind games, intuition, multiverse,... acme, paranormal and supernatural things, and miles of *etceteras*...
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"Now I've got to be free", ... "No place like home"... So I stay in my neighbourhood...
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Thank you for adding this poem to your reading list.
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But I did not mean *falsehoods*
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"... my own perceived journeys... " suggests journeys online, mind games, intuition, multiverse,... acme, paranormal and supernatural things, and miles of *etceteras*...
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"Now I've got to be free", ... "No place like home"... So I stay in my neighbourhood...
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22nd Sep 2024 6:16pm
Traveling like a shadow in the shade. That's me. Sometimes feeling like I'm not really here.
Of course, you've sent me to my dictionary with just the title
Nice ink
Of course, you've sent me to my dictionary with just the title
Nice ink
24th Sep 2024 11:52pm
Thank you for your comment, FATBOY300PLUS.
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If, sometimes, you feel you're not really here,...
... then someone else's casts your shadow.
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If, sometimes, you feel you're not really here,...
... then someone else's casts your shadow.
22nd Sep 2024 6:18pm
Could have used this word in "Government is a Scam". Truck, train, and plane
Thank You
Thank You
24th Sep 2024 11:53pm
