Songs of desires

Rohini, your enjambments are DIVINE!  I love the succinct truth of this.

It's a great pleasure to read your encouraging words. 😊
Thanks a lot, dear Ahavati. And wish you in advance a very happy n prosperous new year 💐

Great write dear poetess ... such resonance in this poem ... I can so relate ...

So happy that this piece appealed to you...
Thank you so much, dear LDF. 😊
May the new year brings loads of happiness to you 💐

The desires are strong within you.  Keep on writing.

Thank you for the read n the  comment, dear poet.
Wish you a very happy new year 💐

Beautifully written, friend.

Thanks a bunch, dear DC for your continued support. Very much appreciated 😊🌷

A++, really felt this amazing write. Thanks, hugs and peace, oral

Wow, that's a great review! Thanks a lot, dear poet 😊

Wish you a fantastic 2021🎉💐

You have an amazing way of weaving words. Thanks for this great poem. Hugs and peace, oral.

Desires are desires , and I do not agree with gurus...

Desires are a good thing , if you can fulfill them...

I have had many desires , many fulfilled , some still waiting...

It is only when we see our desires as this :

"Sucking us deep into your black hole    
until our real identities    
get dissolved"

That we lose ourselves...  

Those who desire , not to have desires , lose themselves...

Including those termed gurus...

Nice poem , and well written , my friend !

I admire how you use the words on this well written poem.
One of the best I've read so far.

Thank you so much! 😊 You really made my evening with your kind words. :)

I felt your words as I read them, an awesome written piece Indreamz.

Thank you so much, dear poetess, for your encouraging words.... Much appreciated 😊🌹

Desire feeds our guilt and ignorance. I love your words that speak of philosophy of life.

Hugs

KS

Thank you kindly, dear poet 🌹🙏