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Wheel of Life (tik tik tok)
inspiration,
breathing in
then breathing out
a rhythmic din
whooshing, waiting
letting go
then breathing out
it's as though
somewhere inside
tik tik tok
hearts beat pounding
like a clock
minutes, hours
day by day
year by year
we slip away
numbers tumbling
rushing by
winter, summer
seem to fly
in the morning
late at night
disappearing
out of sight
breathing in
and breathing out
seems to be
what it's about
rhythmic motion
tik tik tok
round and round
until we stop
breathing in
then breathing out
a rhythmic din
whooshing, waiting
letting go
then breathing out
it's as though
somewhere inside
tik tik tok
hearts beat pounding
like a clock
minutes, hours
day by day
year by year
we slip away
numbers tumbling
rushing by
winter, summer
seem to fly
in the morning
late at night
disappearing
out of sight
breathing in
and breathing out
seems to be
what it's about
rhythmic motion
tik tik tok
round and round
until we stop
Published 18th Dec 2020
Author's Note
inspiration comes from Latin inspirare...to breathe in....best listened to (with headphones)
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Anonymous
- Edited 17th Apr 2021 8:45pm
18th Dec 2020 5:15am
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19th Dec 2020 7:17pm
we're all in this together, breathing the same air, heading for the same destination...thanks for commenting
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Apr 2021 8:45pm
20th Dec 2020 10:44pm
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18th Dec 2020 1:50pm
The wheel keeps on turning, and sometimes we tend to forget this.
Very nice!
Delanee 🌻
Very nice!
Delanee 🌻
19th Dec 2020 7:18pm
on and onon until we're gone...and then come back again...thanks for comment Delanee
