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Hate Fuck
she said she fucking hates me
still here we are
she's sucking me off at the bar
can’t stand the way I laugh
yet she still let me take her to my home
called me a dirty mother fucker
then took off her clothes
bent over the bed begging me to fuck her
she talks shit about me to her friends
my revenge was spanking her ass red
said I'll never amount to anything
that I'll always be trash
so I forced open her legs
gave her pussy a pounding she'll never forget
dumb bitch, acting like she's so drunk
though I only seen her finish one drink
now she's in my home
taking every inch up her ass
made her feel like the dirty whore
I always knew her to be
yeah, she fucking hates me
but come morning time
maybe she’ll hate me more
knowing I stretched open her backdoor
came deep down her throat
left her tied up, passed out on the floor
after all, it's a side of her I never knew
think I like her better this way, anyway
still here we are
she's sucking me off at the bar
can’t stand the way I laugh
yet she still let me take her to my home
called me a dirty mother fucker
then took off her clothes
bent over the bed begging me to fuck her
she talks shit about me to her friends
my revenge was spanking her ass red
said I'll never amount to anything
that I'll always be trash
so I forced open her legs
gave her pussy a pounding she'll never forget
dumb bitch, acting like she's so drunk
though I only seen her finish one drink
now she's in my home
taking every inch up her ass
made her feel like the dirty whore
I always knew her to be
yeah, she fucking hates me
but come morning time
maybe she’ll hate me more
knowing I stretched open her backdoor
came deep down her throat
left her tied up, passed out on the floor
after all, it's a side of her I never knew
think I like her better this way, anyway
Published 15th Dec 2020
Author's Note
A older poem I kind of forgot about. Was reading it today and thought I'll update it.
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15th Dec 2020 10:28am
A very enjoyable spill reminds me of those silent thoughts of revenge of payback in the end the last few lines spoke volumes of truth with depth of the mind as it is a terrible thing to waste FOSHO respect brother poet you smashed it 🤗
15th Dec 2020 10:39am
Thanks. Yeah, I kind of forgot even writing this. Maybe too many years lol. But I wanted to update it because it was very raw but didn't come off forced to me. So was awsome taking the time to revisit this poem.
15th Dec 2020 10:42am
Yeah you definitely open up a bit of my own shadow thoughts deep within my own mind 😁🤗👍
15th Dec 2020 1:34pm
Very enjoyable. Reminds me of a drunk fuck I had once. The doors that night opened have been unforgettable.
--B
--B
16th Dec 2020 7:17am
To let guards down and have some fun can lead to unforgettable nights. Thanks for the read. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
Anonymous
15th Dec 2020 5:04pm
Fucking perfect. Shines a light on how complicated sex can be. Different moods, different needs, wants and desires. We all get what we invite.
Let the games begin.
Let the games begin.
16th Dec 2020 7:20am
I think sometimes to have a stronge emotion towards someone can lead to different feelings. Thanks for reading my poem.
Anonymous
16th Dec 2020 1:06pm
You are so right. Nothing is ever purely black and white. That would be boring.
