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Christmas
♪a rhymed, mirrored octet♪
earth
quivers
in the qualm
of u n c e r t a i n
broken m e l o d i e s
e a s y r e s o l u t i on s
c a n n o t fallen spirits m e n d
for the ways o f men are futile
while they f l o u r i s h in denial
yet the Lord would condescend
bringing a b s o l u t i o n s
though the world despise
perfect p a r d o n
from the Balm
G i v e r ’ s
b i r t h
© Copyright 2020 December 07
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
earth
quivers
in the qualm
of u n c e r t a i n
broken m e l o d i e s
e a s y r e s o l u t i on s
c a n n o t fallen spirits m e n d
for the ways o f men are futile
while they f l o u r i s h in denial
yet the Lord would condescend
bringing a b s o l u t i o n s
though the world despise
perfect p a r d o n
from the Balm
G i v e r ’ s
b i r t h
© Copyright 2020 December 07
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 8th Dec 2020
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
8th Dec 2020 6:25pm
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8th Dec 2020 6:40pm
Thank you, Rew!
I daresay, you show up early -- and first -- in many forums, including Front Rhyme! I hope you are finding ideas that you could work with, in the near future.
Sincerely
cab
I daresay, you show up early -- and first -- in many forums, including Front Rhyme! I hope you are finding ideas that you could work with, in the near future.
Sincerely
cab
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
8th Dec 2020 6:54pm
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9th Dec 2020 3:03am
Haha!
You can cuss me all you want for a good thing, Rew.
I myself might have to cuss William Shakespeare and John Milton and Emily Dickenson and Robert Frost and Roger Mais and Langston Hughes and Claude McKay...
...because they have often set my mind off about possibilities.
I'd love to see you put your thoughts to the test and let me read some of your creations along these lines. You can read up more about octets as well as about mirror writing.
Best regards.
cab
You can cuss me all you want for a good thing, Rew.
I myself might have to cuss William Shakespeare and John Milton and Emily Dickenson and Robert Frost and Roger Mais and Langston Hughes and Claude McKay...
...because they have often set my mind off about possibilities.
I'd love to see you put your thoughts to the test and let me read some of your creations along these lines. You can read up more about octets as well as about mirror writing.
Best regards.
cab
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
9th Dec 2020 8:50am
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