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Money, Money, Money
He earns his money
Then he spends it carelessly
So he's always broke
Then he spends it carelessly
So he's always broke
Published 5th Dec 2020
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Another senyru.
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
5th Dec 2020 7:46pm
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6th Dec 2020 00:33am
Hi, there! Thanks for your wonderful remarks. You asked about the difference between haiku and senyru? The main difference is that haiku typically deals with nature and senyru involves human nature with a comedic twist to it. This is if you are writing it technically correct but nothing is really written in stone
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
6th Dec 2020 8:56am
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6th Dec 2020 9:49am
14th Dec 2020 5:10am
Dear FM,
A fool and his money. If he can’t use it cautiously and save it wisely, turn and walk in the opposite direction! He’ll start coming after yours. Insightful piece. H🌷
A fool and his money. If he can’t use it cautiously and save it wisely, turn and walk in the opposite direction! He’ll start coming after yours. Insightful piece. H🌷
18th Dec 2020 9:44pm
Rhyming comment:
Life - too true
Senryu
Sum up - carelessness undoes gain.
Life - too true
Senryu
Sum up - carelessness undoes gain.
27th Dec 2020 10:58am
15th Feb 2021 3:01am
faithmairee, you created a crystal clear Senryu here. And I can vouch for your meaning. Men often give in to the temptation to spend when their wallet is full. Thank you so much for writing this and reminding me of this.
Xo
John
Xo
John
16th Feb 2021 12:14pm
Hi John! Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I love getting your feedback!
