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Sunset
I climbed our hill today,
I felt you, smelt you,
Heard you whisper in the wind
‘I love you.’
The clouds blazed,
Red as the roses you so loved.
‘Lonely up here, isn’t it?’
I turned.
The old man was kneeling,
Patting his terrier,
His face bleak
‘I used to come up here with my dear wife’ he said.
‘Lonely isn’t a place’ I told him
‘Lonely lives in the soul.’
A tear leaked down his face,
He nodded, turned and left.
I wept into the setting sun.
I felt you, smelt you,
Heard you whisper in the wind
‘I love you.’
The clouds blazed,
Red as the roses you so loved.
‘Lonely up here, isn’t it?’
I turned.
The old man was kneeling,
Patting his terrier,
His face bleak
‘I used to come up here with my dear wife’ he said.
‘Lonely isn’t a place’ I told him
‘Lonely lives in the soul.’
A tear leaked down his face,
He nodded, turned and left.
I wept into the setting sun.
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