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Dreaming Monet
I paused
The clouds were stacked up
Silver and grey
Painted on the sky
Highlighted in white
With splashes of blue
Motionless
Above trees
Mostly still green
Touched here and there
Reddish orange
Yellow-gold
That whispered, "Monet"
On a day waiting to breath
The clouds were stacked up
Silver and grey
Painted on the sky
Highlighted in white
With splashes of blue
Motionless
Above trees
Mostly still green
Touched here and there
Reddish orange
Yellow-gold
That whispered, "Monet"
On a day waiting to breath
Published 29th Nov 2020
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29th Nov 2020 10:42pm
1st Dec 2020 8:27am
Dear AJ,
Ditto NB. I loved the still motion in the piece, “ I paused”,” Motionless”,
“On a day waiting to breath” all of it lends itself to anticipation and discovery. Lovely write. H🌷
Ditto NB. I loved the still motion in the piece, “ I paused”,” Motionless”,
“On a day waiting to breath” all of it lends itself to anticipation and discovery. Lovely write. H🌷
1st Dec 2020 9:08pm
I was you could have seen it. The sky stopped me in my tracks. Thank you for reading H <3
5th Dec 2020 3:51pm
Nature is the most beautiful artist and you have captured it beautifully in your words. 💖
5th Dec 2020 5:55pm
