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Climb
Mountains are meant to be climbed
Mortals at the valley stay
Peace everlasting get
When at the mountain
Troubles all abound
In the valley you find
Woes none can explain
While mankind remain
Climb ye mortal
Your feet for this prepare
Bed of roses not become
At the mountain yet you find
Mortals at the valley stay
Peace everlasting get
When at the mountain
Troubles all abound
In the valley you find
Woes none can explain
While mankind remain
Climb ye mortal
Your feet for this prepare
Bed of roses not become
At the mountain yet you find
Published 20th Nov 2020
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28th May 2021 11:46am
The sense of achievement that is found when you reach the top
After having gone through great obstacles
The relief because of the accomplishment
Appreciation of the moment that is overwhelming
As all those emotions and thoughts run through the mind
After having gone through great obstacles
The relief because of the accomplishment
Appreciation of the moment that is overwhelming
As all those emotions and thoughts run through the mind
28th Jun 2021 1:33am
Thanks Laluma, you got it right, the relief we get once we Climb.
I appreciate your comments and support Everytime.
I appreciate your comments and support Everytime.
