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Control
I am no
Freak on A leash
Or A control freak
For I am the
Freak thats in control
I have a mission
N im determines
With nothing to loose
I am the misfit
That got away
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I created this from dirt
N this is how you pay me back
With betraye and suicide
For I feel this darkness
Trying to pull me down
My leadership is not a gamble
Nor A risk
But after all I made for you
Obsessed with the thaught
Of you my people
Still celebrate when im gone
My friends
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I will let this
Deadly shadow take me away
N guide me to my
True INFINITY
<> <> <> <>
Believe
N
Dream
Freak on A leash
Or A control freak
For I am the
Freak thats in control
I have a mission
N im determines
With nothing to loose
I am the misfit
That got away
<> <> <> <>
I created this from dirt
N this is how you pay me back
With betraye and suicide
For I feel this darkness
Trying to pull me down
My leadership is not a gamble
Nor A risk
But after all I made for you
Obsessed with the thaught
Of you my people
Still celebrate when im gone
My friends
<> <> <> <>
I will let this
Deadly shadow take me away
N guide me to my
True INFINITY
<> <> <> <>
Believe
N
Dream
Published 2nd Feb 2012
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3rd Feb 2012 3:54am
I like the contradiction. You call them friends, yet they're betrayers. Most things really are not black and white. I do think it needs more depth however. Perhaps add more personal feeling?
