Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
re: Very Nice
3rd Feb 2012 1:54am
Burning passion
2nd Feb 2012 1:39am
The beauty of a woman is not in a facial mode but the true beauty in a woman is reflected in her soul. It is the caring that she lovingly gives the passion that she shows. The beauty of a woman grows with the passing years. Passion leads to need, as to want lags into lust. A woman will always have passion until she's scorn. Then the warrior of death is born. Kudos
1
re: Burning passion
3rd Feb 2012 3:30am
I agree that true beauty in a woman is reflected in her soul. Some people don't know that and view beauty as only skin deep. Thank you for the comment. :)
Excellent work real
13th Feb 2012 8:12pm
Passion of love, especially
Make a burning spirit
Yes ignites bodies
The words of your employment
Gunshots
You are firing the power of love
And tell us
Strongly
* --------------- *
Passion
*************
Perhaps you can made more of the word a lot
And is carrying many meanings
Of control
Ownership
And sometimes be a threat in love
Where manufactures complete control
And have the spirit and the heart and mind and body
And can be robbed of what you want to force the word passion
And put us to another gate to come
In
****************
forever burning
***************
A moment of honest
A moment of real love is real
With a companion spirit
Yes
Beautiful and wonderful
You open the closed doors
Raise our passion
Open injured last words of gold
****************************
Burn forever
Raises the burning desire
Very hot passion
It will never be tamed
************************
Rhetorical
Four short lines.
I spoke on the life
Love story Full
You make us torture the words of a luminous
A lot of people
What has the poem between the lines
I am now under the reality of your words
Passion in the six lines short
You have me a story of sixteen simple word rhetorical is the vehicle
Make a great book
Important work
Sophisticated
Talk
Strong
Interesting
Influential
Thank you scarlet velvet
I'm not Make you courtesy ..
you make words from truth
Believe you made your word RhetoricalYou are made rhetorical sublime masterpiece photography
Repeated scenes of life in different parts of the earth
Passion of love .. A dangerous weapon
Thank you
Make a burning spirit
Yes ignites bodies
The words of your employment
Gunshots
You are firing the power of love
And tell us
Strongly
* --------------- *
Passion
*************
Perhaps you can made more of the word a lot
And is carrying many meanings
Of control
Ownership
And sometimes be a threat in love
Where manufactures complete control
And have the spirit and the heart and mind and body
And can be robbed of what you want to force the word passion
And put us to another gate to come
In
****************
forever burning
***************
A moment of honest
A moment of real love is real
With a companion spirit
Yes
Beautiful and wonderful
You open the closed doors
Raise our passion
Open injured last words of gold
****************************
Burn forever
Raises the burning desire
Very hot passion
It will never be tamed
************************
Rhetorical
Four short lines.
I spoke on the life
Love story Full
You make us torture the words of a luminous
A lot of people
What has the poem between the lines
I am now under the reality of your words
Passion in the six lines short
You have me a story of sixteen simple word rhetorical is the vehicle
Make a great book
Important work
Sophisticated
Talk
Strong
Interesting
Influential
Thank you scarlet velvet
I'm not Make you courtesy ..
you make words from truth
Believe you made your word RhetoricalYou are made rhetorical sublime masterpiece photography
Repeated scenes of life in different parts of the earth
Passion of love .. A dangerous weapon
Thank you
0
like it
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2012 7:54pm
said alot in very few words
0
re: like it
24th Feb 2012 5:21am
Thank you Gail. I like a lot of the poems you write. I always appreciate when someone comments on on of my poems. :)
re: Re: Passion
29th Dec 2012 6:53am
Thank you. I just read it again and like the way it turned out. It's a poem from my heart. :)
Re: Passion
14th Jan 2014 2:05am
who says
never be tamed
there are professional tamers
trainers and gamers here
i have cum across so many
who want to fuck
just any
including
man and women gay lesbain
just any
tc
friendly warning
hahahahhaaaaaa
just yawning
never be tamed
there are professional tamers
trainers and gamers here
i have cum across so many
who want to fuck
just any
including
man and women gay lesbain
just any
tc
friendly warning
hahahahhaaaaaa
just yawning
0
Re: Passion
15th Jan 2014 7:57am
Your comments are a bit mystifying to me, but I appreciate your feedback nonetheless...... :)